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I would like to open my tired wings,
Fly toward the infinite, the vastness,
Close my eyes and penetrate into the white, pure clouds,
Be free with the Whole Beauty.
My naked body suddenly falls on the leaves,
many leaves,
beautiful leaves..
The rain beat on my helpless body.
I want to taste intensely the Profound Essence
that life hands us,
Ignoring what  don't accept spontaneity and instincts.
And what do you think, my heart?
You don't want to answer. I understand you.
Don't let me interpret what you want weakly whisper to me.
Sweet
Naive
Indecipherable
Message
Cause of deep embarrassment  for the mind of people.
Stay up there.
Where nobody can see you,
nor hear you, nor understand you.
Stay here,

Inside of me.
:iconiamaliel:
My first poem. I was 14 years.
I was beginning to understand how this world turns.
I still have something inside of that innocent girl.
We lose our purity of mind living as cowards.
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very intense and pure
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~Iamaliel Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks... it means a lot to me
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:iconbiblethumperplz:
Is a curse.. these dysfunctional wings.. binding our selfs..
I drew a line as a child..
Obscured in the shit..
I rage to keep it now..
I KNOW it's there...
Perhaps the only purity I've had, true in self I carved this line..
It hurts to keep it in sight, but I do, somehow...
It is my pain...
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Mood: Love ~Iamaliel Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
My compliments my dear.. I adore u....
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:iconbiblethumperplz:
Thanks, but you are the one who deserves the compliments, sweetheart.
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:icons3ptic:
Inside you seems like it would be a beautiful place...
I started to recognize the gears of this world when I was in 4th or 5th grade.. didn't fully understand at the time.. but I knew what they were.
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Mood: Adoration ~Iamaliel Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Education wants to hide the Sewer..
but We ARE the Dirty Chain of Shit.
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:icons3ptic:
Well.. you can't hide a stench forever..
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